Pitch

 Pitch

Pitch Feedback

From my pitch, I had numerous responses and pieces of feedback:

WWW:

- Have band performance at end?

- Have band in a natural setting?

- Location ideas

- Website ideas

- Mood board/colour scheme

- Ideas for intertextuality 

- Song choice

- Narrative idea

EBI:

- 30 seconds clip editing, pacing, range of shots

- Could I use actors pretending to play instruments in the band?

- Have a girl and girl couple instead of heterosexual couple, but get a boy to sing the melody?

- More diverse representation 

Possible locations

Possible Locations in London for my Music Video

London Underground

- The beginning of my video will take place on a train, where the 2 main characters meet for the first time. I can make use of the windows/poles to create interesting framing choices

Knightsbridge

- More residential environment

Leadenhall Market

- Here, I hope to use the many lines/arches/windows... to create interestingly framed images which. indirectly, suggest dynamics between the 2 main characters

South Bank

- Streetlights at night

Abbey Road

- This serves as an intertextual reference

Leake Street

- Here, I can utilise the variety of colours to create more striking, colourful images

St James' Park

- Natural imagery

Primrose Hill

- Establishing shot to highlight location

 

Mood Board

 

Focus Group

Focus Group

Primary audience

 

Secondary audience