Pitch Feedback

From my pitch, I had numerous responses and pieces of feedback:

WWW:

- Have band performance at end?

- Have band in a natural setting?

- Location ideas

- Website ideas

- Mood board/colour scheme

- Ideas for intertextuality 

- Song choice

- Narrative idea

EBI:

- 30 seconds clip editing, pacing, range of shots

- Could I use actors pretending to play instruments in the band?

- Have a girl and girl couple instead of heterosexual couple, but get a boy to sing the melody?

- More diverse representation