Pitch Feedback
From my pitch, I had numerous responses and pieces of feedback:
WWW:
- Have band performance at end?
- Have band in a natural setting?
- Location ideas
- Website ideas
- Mood board/colour scheme
- Ideas for intertextuality
- Song choice
- Narrative idea
EBI:
- 30 seconds clip editing, pacing, range of shots
- Could I use actors pretending to play instruments in the band?
- Have a girl and girl couple instead of heterosexual couple, but get a boy to sing the melody?
- More diverse representation
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