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NEA First Draft Feedback
NEA First Draft Feedback
Website:
- Much more interactive (sign up to newsletter, subscribe, competitons)
- More animations (spinning vinyls?, fades, pop ups)
- Include links on buttons (link tour dates to ticketmaster, social media icons to the platforms, album covers to Spotify)
- Make discography bigger
- Out sold out banners to tour dates
- Warner music group logo somewhere
- Animations for vinyls on the shop
- More decorative features
- More copy explaining each section
- More bold/bright
- Make the logo softer/less saturated/brighter to contrast the video
- Change the blurry pic or Zach
- Overlay over music video “new video out now”
- Make sure videos on website work, link to YouTube
- Include quotes from the song
Music video:
- Slow motion
- Transitions between clips
- Warner music group logo in corner
- Link to website and socials at end
- Overlays with reduced opacity
- Include lyrics/animations at times
- Shots of Aidan singing at the start are maybe too dark
- More guitar in general
- Faster cutting?
- More shots that match the lyrics (e.g. “something in the way she moves”)
- Less back of them
- More match cuts of the guitar playing
- More match cuts generally
- Slo mo on the escalator shot
- Make the pacing of the first half better
- Blue title is hard to see?
- More fake guitar solo in instrumental (include him in the frame, not just close up)
- Scenes a little shaky/blurry?
- More varied scenes/less repeated
- Some cuts are off beat, especially in the last section
- More shots of Hristina herself
- More varied shots of Aidan
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